How long, and how formatted, a cold email should be
The short answer
Short wins. A stranger owes you nothing, so a long cold email is a large favour you have not earned. Aim for a few short sentences, one idea per paragraph, and enough white space to scan in seconds. Length signals effort in the wrong direction, and a dense block gets deleted before it is read.
The reader decides whether to engage in the first second, and that decision is made on shape before a single word is read. A short, airy email invites a read; a long dense wall of text ends the conversation on sight.

Short, because they owe you nothing
A cold recipient has no obligation to you, so every extra sentence is asking for more unearned attention. Length reads as work, and work from a stranger gets skipped.
Most effective cold emails are a few sentences: a specific reason for writing, the problem, one line on how you help, and an easy ask. That is usually the ceiling, not the target.
Shape is judged before words
People scan before they read, so the visual shape decides whether they start. A short email with white space looks answerable; a long unbroken block looks like a chore. You win or lose the read on shape, which is why formatting is not cosmetic here.
One idea per paragraph
Break the email into short paragraphs, ideally one thought each. Dense multi-idea paragraphs are hard to scan and easy to abandon.
A line of white space between thoughts does real work: it makes the email feel quick and lets a skimmer follow the argument without effort.
Formatting, lightly
Simple formatting helps, heavy formatting hurts. Short paragraphs and the occasional line break aid readability; images, buttons and columns turn a personal note into a campaign, which is the wrong signal for cold email. Keep it to what a person would naturally type, as the plain text guide covers.
Cut to earn the reply
After drafting, cut. Remove the throat-clearing intro, the mission statement, anything that could go to any prospect. What remains, short, specific and scannable, is what gets read and answered. Editing down is most of the work.
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